Front Cover: Like your colour scheme and masthead You need to work on the layout of your article headlines. The bottom of the page seems a bit bare.
Contents: ‘contents’ looks good. You need to work on the alignment of your columns. If they are equally balanced you mag will look more sleek and professional. I would say editor’s note is too spaced out and quite difficult to read on your background. Is 45 pages enough? Good idea to include a picture of the decks however I think you could improve the other picture - more attitude.
DPS: Headline and Strapline are very good. Good continuity of style across your magazine. Need more variation with selected pictures and they could be better manipulated. Need to use columns (as we discussed). I’m not sure what the ‘Tomorrow Land’ is? I can’t read the smaller writing.
Front Cover: Like your colour scheme and masthead
ReplyDeleteYou need to work on the layout of your article headlines. The bottom of the page seems a bit bare.
Contents: ‘contents’ looks good.
You need to work on the alignment of your columns. If they are equally balanced you mag will look more sleek and professional.
I would say editor’s note is too spaced out and quite difficult to read on your background.
Is 45 pages enough?
Good idea to include a picture of the decks however I think you could improve the other picture - more attitude.
DPS:
Headline and Strapline are very good. Good continuity of style across your magazine.
Need more variation with selected pictures and they could be better manipulated.
Need to use columns (as we discussed).
I’m not sure what the ‘Tomorrow Land’ is? I can’t read the smaller writing.
Good work so far Harper – On the right track